Alone amongst the multitudes
Her colour a beacon
Attracting more than the human eye
The others looked at her with disdain and contempt
Their commonality their unity
She raged against them
But they stood indifferent
Until she took flight....
Her flight into the skies was a thing of beauty
Her wings moving in tandem
Striking a beat against the currents
Even the wind bowed in defeat...
She soared high
A surprise because her kind hardly ever did
Achieving unassailable heights
5 comments:
That is simply beautiful!!!
It captures the feel of a pigeons flight. Very evocative.
err..not to be the one to nitpick.. but the birds in the picture resemble terns and not pigeons.
(you can remove this comment if u like)
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Ash
Yes tht is quite rt Item. This fotu won some prize and Boy was kind enuf to send to me and darling yur comment is priceless! :D
lovee this one:) mwah. write more poetry!!!!!
It's an absolutely marvelous lyric poem. Wished you had named it 'Until She Took Flight...' or something like that... more evocative. Never mind. Just keep on writing. My cup runneth over...
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